So, one of my favorite things to do is to go on Craigslist and check out the personals section to see how the guys are doing. Unfortunately, I usually end up disappointed. You see, when I go to the "Men seeking Women" section and look at their profile subject lines, I can't help but shake my head.
Here are several examples taken right off CL.
Hey Baby!
Hey!
Gentlemen seeks a beautiful companion.
Chat!
SWM seeking soulmate possibilities
SWM searching for a close discreet friend.
Looking to have some fun.
Got a bun in the oven? (What?)
Dinner and a Movie?
Canvas Converse in the Boardroom.
RIGHT HERE.
This is who I am! Please help.
If you're petite with a tight little...
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
mature
A Really Nice Guy
Looking to Date Again
Good god!! There are so many things wrong with the above, I wouldn't know where to start! I'm not even sure what a couple of them mean! When it comes to getting attention, lots of guys have really gotten creative, and NOT in a good way.
Writing an online profile does NOT have to be difficult. Remember, attractive women on dating sites have plenty of options to choose from so you want a profile headline that's not only creative, but GET'S ATTENTION! And isn't creepy and weird.
I like to use ambiguous headlines that generate mystery. You know, a headline that makes her HAVE to know what I'm talking about...
Something like; "Oh no! I can't BELIEVE you're going to do that!"
Now, when a woman is browsing through a list of endless boring profiles, what do you think she'll do when she sees this subject line? I'm going to bet that she'll click on it to see what I mean by "that."
And that's what you want! Women can't turn down a mystery....EVER!
So, when you go online and write up a profile, try coming up with a subject line similar to what I have above. And come up with a clever way to start out your profile answering the subject line.
I'm telling you, this gets women to click through EVERY time!!
Tuesday, September 9, 2008
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